The Orffyreus Wheel – Perpetual Motion? A Novel, & Some Thoughts

Orffyreus Wheel - Audio Concept - SmallBefore I get too far into describing this novel, I want to talk a bit about where it came from.  First off, it was a novel that I never would have written left to my own devices.  That said, once I had decided that I DID want to write it, I ran into one of the walls in publishing that irritates me the most.  An agent who – rather than really being interested in my work, my vision, my voice, etc. – really only wanted someone who could write another “Da Vinci Code” before it lost its appeal and she had to come up with another thing to try and make her authors copy.  Authors – write what moves you.  Anything other than this will result in – at best – lukewarm, mediocre writing.  A worst?  It will make you want to stop writing altogether, and then you begin to cave in to entropy and the great boredom that binds.  I mean this with all my heart.  If you are going to write, write thing that matter to you because there is no way in hell they will matter to someone else if you don’t.

I’ve said this before, but it bears repeating.  Agents work for writers.  That’s the dynamic that works.  That is no longer the dynamic in the publishing industry, and it’s a bad, horrible, spit it from your mouth thing.  You should NOT spend your hours and nights and weeks and even years banging your head on some agent’s desk trying to write what they think is the next big thing.  A: They may have a connection to sell books to, but they are no more qualified to call the next big thing than the editors who – in general – ignore THEM in the same way they ignore you.  You may, or may not write the next big thing, but your odds drop astronomically when you stop writing what you want/need to write and start trying to please “the machine”. If your agent makes you feel as if you work for them, that you have to curry their favor?  They aren’t agents at all.  It’s not what they are supposed to do.  They are supposed to have faith in YOU, YOUR talent, and YOUR vision…if they don’t they should represent someone else, and you should have nothing to do with them because -from my experience and that of many others, the odds are you will sell most of your own books over your career.  The agent may, or may not help with contracts – but they WILL collect 15 percent of everything you make.  They should earn it, not make you feel as if you work for them…and yet pay them.

Orffyreus Wheel - Concept - FinalAnyway…The Orffyreus Wheel was one of several ideas I came up with for a particular agent.  She wanted me to write something like The Da Vinci Code.  I came to her with several proposals – all of which she wanted three chapters and  an outline for – none of which she could – in the end – be bothered to represent.  When I finally figured out she was killing my ability to work at all, I cut that anchor chain – and began writing again.  I sold a bunch of books fairly quickly, and during that time, I wrote The Orffyreus Wheel because, though the prod to go and find this story came from elsewhere, once I DID find it, I was fascinated, and knew it needed to be completed.

It’s relevant.  Whether or not Johann Bessler invented a perpetual motion wheel that could have pumped water virtually forever, barring worn out hardware, is a moot point.  What would happen if someone presented such a constant, free energy source to the world is not.  The fuel and power behind our world is controlled by people who consider most of the rest of us bugs. If they didn’t need the bugs to use their energy, they’d do away with us cheerfully.  Witness the billion dollar severance pay-outs for oil execs and the fact that bankers who run failed banks and ruin people are still rich.  They would not be on board with a good, clean, free energy source -they would want to either own it – or destroy all knowledge of it. Don’t even get me started about what the government might do with it.

That is the basis of half of my novel.  It runs on twin timelines – one in the past, a fictionalized version of the life of one Johann Bessler, the invention of his wheel, the power struggles that ensued, the hatred from his peers, where it all led.  In the present – an heir with the keys to that same secret, and enemies so large and dark she can barely comprehend them.

This is a thriller.  It is also a historical novel.  It is fast-paced and I think, intriguing.  It was published as a serial by “Amazon Shorts,” one of the old Amazon programs – and was a bestseller in that program, but the program died just as the last segments were going live, and the book fizzled.  I brought it back as an eBook, revised and cleaned up – it’s also available as an unabridged audiobook….one day before long it will finally see print.

This Wednesday and Thursday – it will be a free eBook on Amazon.com and I hope you’ll take a chance on it.  It was not a book I would have found and written on my own, and for that much I thank Dan Brown and that old, not-very-helpful agent.  It’s notable that once I sold one of the other books she did not like – The Mote in Andrea’s Eye, she had the temerity to write, congratulating me on my success and ask if I needed her to represent it… Seriously.  That happened.  I managed to keep a civil tongue and bid her adieu.

There are stories to write, you see, and every one of the stories she told me I should not write are now published…some with a degree of success, and NONE paying her fifteen percent for hating them.  I’ll count that in the win column!  If you are an audio lover, you can buy the eBook for $3.99 and receive the “Whispersync for Voice Ready” audiobook for $1.99  – narrated by Ian Alexander.  If you download it later this week for free – you can STILL get the audio for $1.99.   Come on – let me tell you a story.

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